Jumat, 10 Oktober 2014



Second revisi
Good Paragraph
To write a good paragraph , we have to know it’s features. There are topic sentence which main idea from that paragraph. Next supporting sentences which the result by developing of topic sentence. After that conclusion which the result of merger topic sentence and supporting sentences. Lastly Technical rules that is punctuation, conjunction, capital letter. So a good paragraph is a paragraph which has topic sentence , supporting sentence, conclusion, and technical rules.

Sabtu, 04 Oktober 2014

First Writing

FEATURES OF A PARAGRAPH
*Before
            To write a good paragraph, we have to know the features of a paragraph. First we have decide the topic, And then we can develop to make supporting sentences. A good paragraph also has several sentence. Which has conclusion in the end of the paragraph. Punctuation is a important thing to make good paragraph. I almost forgot that the most important thing in a paragraph is the topic sentence and main sentence have to be related , because if that  not related it will have two means or more. That’s all about good paragraph.

Comment :
1.     Capitals : And should be and.
2.     Article   : a important should be an important .
3.     If that not related should be if that is not related .
4.  Topic sentence and main sentence have to be related should be topic sentence and supporting sentence.

*After
            To write a good paragraph , we have to know its features. First we have to decide the topic, and then we can develop to make supporting sentences. A good paragraph also has several sentences, which has conclusion in the end of the paragraph. Punctuation is an important thing to make good paragraph. I almost forgot that the most important thing in a paragraph is the topic sentence and supporting sentences have to be related , because if that is not relatd it will has two means or more. That’s all about good paragraph.


Nama   : Anita Herawati
NIM    : 14202241050
Kelas   : J